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Panel 2 I love his expression, but I still feel like his nose doesnt have the right structure. It looks completely broken here. and even if it should look that way, bent at the bridge, the base of his nose is positioned like we are looking straight at it, but the top half looks like its at the 3/4 view like the rest of his face. It looks just right in the last panel, so it seems you're getting it some of the times. Because its just a weird distinct nose, you're gonna have to get it just right every time.
I like the lighting in panel 3, good composition. His left hand looks off, I first saw it like it was a right hand with the way his thumb is positioned. It might read better having his thumb rest on the edge closer to us instead of down on the vertical plane of the case.
I LOVE the last panel. Just perfect. his eyes are great!